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haiku war: one, perfect. by ~rawrkimmie:iconrawrkimmie:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Haiku & Eastern


a little less than
your madness and my treason
but all it could be.
©2009 ~rawrkimmie
:iconrawrkimmie:

Author's Comments

haiku war with ~stuff7
aka my hombre peter.
to sum it up... we write haikus in response to each other's.
pretty simple.

(by the way, it's not about you, peter.)
:D

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Mood: Affection ~bear-ferdinand Apr 2, 2009, 3:53:27 PM
i like your creative haikus.
lots.
and lots.
and maybe even they are better than my haiku, by like umm... three.
a whole lot more fantastic than mine than anyone would think.
definitely. somewhat. obviously.
=D
:iconrawrkimmie:
~rawrkimmie Apr 3, 2009, 12:41:43 PM
ahaha
but i love your haikus.
i might even want to try a baconator now.
and also
maybe
some bayer aspirin
to prevent my heart attack.

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there's no room in this hell. there's no room in the next.
:iconbear-ferdinand:
~bear-ferdinand Apr 3, 2009, 12:57:03 PM
you should try a baconator.
they are delicious.
and probably even good for you if eaten in small amounts.
like one a day.
they're kind of like vitamins if you think about it.
and you're just supposed to let the heart attack come, it makes the whole baconator experience that much better.
:iconrawrkimmie:
~rawrkimmie Apr 3, 2009, 12:58:41 PM
maybe maybe maybe
ummm
not even like vitamins at all.
i think sitting on wet grass would make it better, too.

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there's no room in this hell. there's no room in the next.
:iconbear-ferdinand:
~bear-ferdinand Apr 3, 2009, 1:09:00 PM
sitting on wet grass makes everything better i hear.
and baconators happen to be just like vitamins.
you could live off of them and not even die or anything (even though that just happens to be exactly what living off of something means).
and maybe you'd even be healthier than if you just eated vitamins.
:iconrawrkimmie:
~rawrkimmie Apr 3, 2009, 1:37:12 PM
i hear that too.

hmm
i'm pretty sure just vitamins isn't all that healthy...

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there's no room in this hell. there's no room in the next.
:iconbear-ferdinand:
~bear-ferdinand Apr 3, 2009, 1:43:11 PM
if you say vitamins like bear grylls it makes them healthy.
because he is a god.
:iconrawrkimmie:
~rawrkimmie Apr 3, 2009, 1:44:09 PM
vitt a minz?

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there's no room in this hell. there's no room in the next.
:iconbear-ferdinand:
~bear-ferdinand Apr 3, 2009, 1:49:01 PM
yes.
and also.
glass ears.
best guy ever.
he even eats turtles like a god. and frogs. and snakes. and lizards.
he's not a big fan of the amphibians and reptiles....
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